True Luna: Rejected By My Mate (The White Wolf Series)

This is the story of a pack of werewolves. They have lost their elder Alpha and Luna's Logan's father and Andrew and Emma's parents were killed. The characters really draw you in and the story makes you want to read through it in one sitting. My only complaint is the sibling relationship between Emma and Andrew. It is really over the top and unbelievable at times. This story depicts Logan the Alpha of the pack rejecting Emma, Andrew's sister, his true mate and the consequences that follow. We come to the end of this story and Emma's self esteem is in the dumps and can't it in herself to believe what Logan, her mate, and pack leader are saying after all that she has gone through with Sienna and Rolf. I hope she grows stronger in her belief in herself and being able to be a great Luna, despite Logan not believing she could be, because he didn't know how strong the White wolf was and that was who Emma is. Interesting and good read.

I loved this series. The book has a strong story line and I liked the characters. I know other reviews felt the writing being more geared to younger readers or immature, but I did not feel this was the case. The story and characters kept my interest and I binge read these books because I could not put it down. Like many of these books, it could use some proofreading and editing. However, this did not distract from the story. I would recommend this series.

This was definitely written by a *young* person. The language is of someone young and immature. However, the storyline itself is rather strong. I hate it ended so abruptly and with such unfinished business, but also understand the need to garner more ground with future readers. This would be a good book for young readers, but mature readers may struggle with the language structure.

I thoroughly enjoyed book 1. It was so well written and compelling that I hated to put it down. In fact, I actually cancelled an engagement in order to keep reading. It was so all consuming that, unfortunately, I was able to complete the entire book within 48 hours. I can't wait to start book 2....I just hope it picks up where book 1 left off.

The storyline idea and the characters were pretty promising and I enjoyed the very beginning of the book. But as it progressed, a lot of the writing sounded really juvenile and the character’s reactions to situations tended to be unrealistic. The main character is supposed to be angry with the male lead for terribly betraying her, but then later lets him engage in constant PDA with her like nothing happened. Towards the last half of the book the ML is touching her constantly and calling her baby so much that it was grating and annoying. The author spends so much time writing about how hurt and angry the female lead feels, but yet she has no outward personality or reaction when interacting with the male lead. To add to the unrealistic interactions, at one point in the story the female lead is badly injured and meanwhile the ML gets a hard on while he’s thinking about her. I don’t know anyone who has sexual thoughts about horribly injured people while they’re lying in a hospital bed. It was weird. Not a lot actually happens in the first book because the author spends most of the time switching between all the different character’s perspectives and feelings on every scene that takes place, that by the time you reach the end you realize there were barely any interactions between the characters or development in the story. The book also ends in a really odd place making this feel like I read a couple chapters that got cut off in the middle of a conversation, instead of having finished a book.

Once you start reading you can’t stop. The story is well written and keeps you wanting more. Can’t wait to read the entire series.

AA great story from the first to the last page. I read the entire book in one afternoon. It stirs up your emotions with just one sentence. You experience love, hate, joy, sadness, termoil, anger and every emotion inbetween. You cry tears of joy as well as sadness in the story. I will say I did not like the ending at all. Why? Because it didn't end! It leaves you right in the middle of a unfinished happy ever after. But that means that you have to get book number two to pick up where it leaves off. Tricky little Tessa 😉

I saw this story on a FB or IG ad and after reading it, decided to search for it on Amazon. The story is gripping! Once I started reading, I couldn't stop! I had to know why she was rejected. I'm totally invested on it and waiting for the next book (yes, I already read all three books!) The story is great, but it needs a developmental editor and a proofreader (which is why the 4 stars) There are a few parts that get repetitive and unnecessary (for example, chapters and chapters where the MC is in the hospital, and nothing is really happening) making these shorter, would make the story "tighter." If you don't mind a few typos, you shouldn't have a problem with it (because the story is good!) There could be more "show" of the MCs power. We just keep hearing about her power, but we never get to see it in action (not really.) My other thing (but it could be a culture thing) the relationship with the brother, was cringy at parts (like sitting on his lap) to me, hugs would have been perfect. Get it! You'll love it!

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I liked the book, great story I sure hope the character of luna gets better and more interesting. She appears to lack the gumption needed to be a luna.

It's a nice werewolf story. I liked the main character Emma very much. Unfortunately this story wasn't that long. I finished it in two days.

The author wrote a very nice story, easy to read. However I won’t continue with the rest of the books just because I can’t stand the personality of the main female character, so weak and with a lack of self-steem. She can’t stand for what she thinks or wants, every time living in the worst case scenario and being a victim of the circumstances. I don’t like how submissive she is with her mate after what he said and did to her.

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