Girl Games: First Time Feminization Novella Kindle Edition

Although I don't often have a "can't put down" moment with this genre of book, this one was so enthralling that I found myself unable to put it down without VERY good reason. The writing was very good (with few grammer & spelling errors; many less than some books I've read) & held my interest with a good story & very well defined characters who had appropriate emotions & actions. The HEA was surprising but appreciated. I will be reading more of this author's books!

The story moves at just the right pace. It also provides what I believe to not only be a sensuous read, but a heartwarming ending. Fantasy is always surpassing reality but this particular story is one I have dreamed of for years. The author really hit the mark, making it more than worthwhile. Really makes me wish I had the courage to be myself when I was in college, just like Allie in this story!

Ethan is picked by one of the hottest girls on campus to take part in a cross-dressing competition, and fun and games ensue. Ethan (Allie) discovers many surprises in the process of changing from shy nerd to confident and sexy woman. A delightful and playful story of experimenting and discovering sexuality in a different guise. No gay bashing or hatred from other characters, other than a jealous competitor.

Meet Ethan a guy who is always picked last in everything.Then their was an event he went to that would change his life forever.It was a contest that the hottest girls at school dreamed up to make the most the most unrealistic guys into hot girls in a week.Ethan was chosen by Heather and soon he was Allie.Then he met a guy named Dylan and was afraid to tell him the truth.Read the book to find out the results of the competition and what happened with Dylan. Can this become a nightmare or a dream come true.?Though I bet you know the answer already .This is a good book which is hard (no pun intended) to put down.

Another skinny guy who gets feminized, but a little different this time. There's an over the top contest, but also a more natural aspect, with some very realistic reactions when things start becoming intense. The mean girls are both nicer and meaner than you might think, and more hands on than usual, instead of just barking orders. Also his mistress is a lot more connected to him, though not as sexually involved as she seemed she would. A romantic resolution that satisfies everyone(maybe not that one girl). Dana is currently putting together an interactive game version of this, where you can choose your path for the games and a lot more. Come over to her Patreon page and see what kind of fun we're having helping her create a world to play in.

I always appreciate when an erotica author writes a long fully fleshed out book. This was pretty much that. She says it's 3 time as long as her usual stuff. But to be honest there was plenty of room to make it even longer. It's not quite fully fleshed out, but it would like have to leave the erotica category and move more into romance or coming of age type of story for that. Still I thought it was great

Really awesome writing as always with Dana. And it's a really good story. Until the end. It just ends. Like with two massive unresolved plot lines. Heather was just jettisoned at the bar. But there's still so much we need to know about her and Allie's relationship. Are they really going to be BFFs now? And then Jennifer. Yes she is a villain, but was she vanquished? Did she see the error of her ways being a mean girl? How is she going to react if Allie really is Heather's new BFF? And what about her protege? We get teased about Juliet a couple of times in the story, and she does appear to be Allie's most challenging competition then... Nothing. Jennifer and Juliet just evaporate after the competition with nothing really resolved. Kinda how Heather gets blown off for a sex scene to close the book. NOOOOOO! I mean the only person I was left feeling any closure about was Kev. Sure his closure was "Oh, my roommate's a hot chick now, cool. I'm gonna play Doom," but at least it was something.

The difficulties of his transformation is not a big problem in the story which is why we enjoyed it so much. I don't want to be in a place where we are feeling bad about him discovering that he is a better and happier person when he becomes a she. I think it's just nice to be able to enjoy the first time and feel like you are happy for him/her without spending too much time with the suffering that we have been through before and we will never forget go gurl